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Did Ch6 ever get a public release? Or is that supposed to be next 19/01

hi feedback for you ! i am loving the V.N. but there seems to be a almost v.n. breaker and it has to do with sound files i am a headphone user all the time and what just happened to me could drive people away it happened the night before the weekend beach party, you are out side after having fun with with the blond bomb shell aunty  and its the police siren's that no later what you do don't get quieter with all 3 sliders set to 0 don't do anything had to mute all and ouuccchhhh my poor ears are still ringin from it was that bad gad to rip off the headset it was the loud and painful, i  just hope this can be fixxed before it puts people off from reading futher on and also i caught a far few crash's as well and have the traceback file saved for you :-

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

  File "game/chapter3.rpy", line 1793, in script call

    call chapter_3_save from _call_chapter_3_save

  File "game/chapter4.rpy", line 2235, in script call

    call chapter_4_save from _call_chapter_4_save

  File "game/chapter5.rpy", line 2014, in script call

    call chapter_5_save from _call_chapter_5_save

  File "game/chapter6.rpy", line 2060, in script call

    call chapter_6_save from _call_chapter_6_save

  File "game/chapter7.rpy", line 937, in script

    if harem_route_ch6 is True:

  File "game/chapter7.rpy", line 937, in <module>

    if harem_route_ch6 is True:

NameError: name 'harem_route_ch6' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "game/chapter3.rpy", line 1793, in script call

    call chapter_3_save from _call_chapter_3_save

  File "game/chapter4.rpy", line 2235, in script call

    call chapter_4_save from _call_chapter_4_save

  File "game/chapter5.rpy", line 2014, in script call

    call chapter_5_save from _call_chapter_5_save

  File "game/chapter6.rpy", line 2060, in script call

    call chapter_6_save from _call_chapter_6_save

  File "game/chapter7.rpy", line 937, in script

    if harem_route_ch6 is True:

  File "renpy/ast.py", line 1893, in execute

    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):

  File "renpy/python.py", line 2266, in py_eval

    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)

  File "renpy/python.py", line 2259, in py_eval_bytecode

    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)

  File "game/chapter7.rpy", line 937, in <module>

    if harem_route_ch6 is True:

NameError: name 'harem_route_ch6' is not defined

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1

Ren'Py 7.4.8.1895

Wings of Silicon Chapter7

Sun Mar 20 00:12:59 2022

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(played chapter 7 version available on patreon)

This game shows potential, the renders are beautiful. However, it’s quite a mess. Disabled walkthrough still shows up on some choices and there’s a bunch of writing errors (I remember some misused your/you’re and a few completely swallowed words).

There are also some technical difficulties, such as horribly imbalanced audio (there’s a background track in chapter 7 that is waaaaay too loud, and the music appears to get louder on reloads?) or the fact that the pause menu buttons at the bottom don’t highlight when selected, so the only indicator whether you’re trying to save or load is the section title at the top.

Furthermore, the faces somewhat fall in the uncanny valley territory and some of the renders are quite ridiculous.[1]

Overall 4/10, I didn’t really enjoy the game even if the potential kept me playing, and the fap material wasn’t good enough either.

Also, the food delivery girl (I just finished the game and already forgot her name lol) is IMO not only the most attractive visually (by far) but honestly the only one attractive character-wise and it’s a shame she gets so little screen time.

More feedback, with spoilers

[1]There’s a scene with a woman in a red dress, maybe in the car accident scene, where that dress is completely painted onto her tits.

In some scenes, like Ash’s BJ scene, you have to click multiple times without any feedback that you’re actually progressing.

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Feedback for you.

I have come across i error in the when you are talking to the next door neighor she said she was married but dan't take the ring off but in all there talk there is not ring on her finger even in the once close up and not even a sun tan outline of where is should have been, i was not sure if you was aware of it, but am loving the story as well as the artwork keep up the great V.N.'s versions.

Mr GaTeZ


Chapter 3 is downloading as an empty zip folder on Android with a message saying download is corrupted, tried it 3 different times

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Is it intentional to spell "Saphire" as such?

The more accepted spelling would be "Sapphire".

Just my two cents -not that important, merely an observation.

EDIT: the default name "Mia" persists during first conversation with her -even though I chose to rename the character.

Thank you for your review. I will solve some typos and the Mia issue asap :)